I was really excited about the opportunity to do some revisions on one of my pieces for this quarter, but I had a terrible time deciding which one to choose. I felt that so many of the pieces I wrote could have been better. In the end, I decided to rewrite my first timed writing essay, for the movie "Remember the Titans." I was extremely pleased with this essay the first time around, but thought that it deserved the revision because there would no longer be a time limit, and I made some simple mistakes. I felt that if I rewrote one of the other essays, I would have to change things too much in order to be happy with the rewrite, and I didn't feel that completely redoing one of the assignments would be an effective way in showing my ability to resee and revise my work. Instead, I took the observations left by my instructor to heart, and combined them with the changes I would have made had I had more time the first time around, and ran with it.